She says, He says

She says, He says

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

She says:

     I don’t want this friendship fall

     I’ll accept it, his apology

     But it seems that he doesn’t care at all

     He doesn’t say anything to me

 

 

 

He says:

     I want this fight over

     Because she’s an important friend, I treasured her truly

     I want to make up things with her

     But I’m scared that she won’t accept my apology

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I dedicate this to my friend, Thrinna and to my other friend...Just ignore the grammar problems.... >.<

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nice one i loved that a lot :)
Truly friendship is above a lot of things )

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with Akshat on this. Liked the write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This happens sometimes with people..
I think you should make it more larger..
that will help the poem:)


Posted 13 Years Ago


It really does highlight what is and isn't said and felt, top write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would accept it...Why not? I can always forgive...BUT I CAN NEVER FORGET! :)))
Did he really say this? Just quite curious...
Anyway, nice writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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