Madness

In this four cornered white room

I met my doom

There’s a single window with grills

where the moonlight shines in these tears.

 

I fear this room full of bloody hand prints

I want to take off these chains in my feet that imprison me.

I watch my fingers bleed.

Having thought, why It should be like this?

 

I can hear voices, their plea

“Let me go! Let me go! I want to go home! Please!”

But those white monsters don’t seem to care.

Everyone suffer, it’s so hard to bear.

 

Why reality is unfair and unjust

Why this world is full of wicked and lust?

There’s so many questions in my head, why am I going through this!?

Normal life is all I wished.

 

The world itself became mad.

We judge each other, like this, like that

We’re the ones to blame

For all of us are insane!

Author's Note

I'm a little bit insane today and this poem popped in my mind..... >.<
just ignore the grammar problems

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

better than ignoring the grammer problems ..friend... ask that they be pointed out ..or rather use an editor to correct them..always remember your friends are the best critics you will have, write for them as well as you can...nice content and style is very open..I like it.

[Black]

i love it

[Lily Mae]

I love it..you penned it well.. xx :)

[stars are far]

This is amazing and greatly done ...
i loved it :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great thoughts expressed so beautifully, feelings that are relatable

[Thea]

Great poem...Nice imagery... :)