Madness

In this four cornered white room

I met my doom

There’s a single window with grills

where the moonlight shines in these tears.

 

I fear this room full of bloody hand prints

I want to take off these chains in my feet that imprison me.

I watch my fingers bleed.

Having thought, why It should be like this?

 

I can hear voices, their plea

“Let me go! Let me go! I want to go home! Please!”

But those white monsters don’t seem to care.

Everyone suffer, it’s so hard to bear.

 

Why reality is unfair and unjust

Why this world is full of wicked and lust?

There’s so many questions in my head, why am I going through this!?

Normal life is all I wished.

 

The world itself became mad.

We judge each other, like this, like that

We’re the ones to blame

For all of us are insane!

Author's Note

I'm a little bit insane today and this poem popped in my mind..... >.<
just ignore the grammar problems

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

better than ignoring the grammer problems ..friend... ask that they be pointed out ..or rather use an editor to correct them..always remember your friends are the best critics you will have, write for them as well as you can...nice content and style is very open..I like it.

[Amila Jay]

Powerful indeed, I really like this poem, great stuff there:)

[kurdapiaful]

great one :)

[SinnerInspired]

Inanely awesome!

[K.C. Zbryk]

it feels as if i am trapped in you madness, surrounded by those screams, and the ending just made this something that all can relate to. Very descriptive and very well written

[Honourfish]

excellent poem! the first four verses almost seem like an extended metaphor which ran deep into the last verse which made the message stand out. Also your use of first person works really well and puts more emotion into the poem. Thanks for a great read

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I loved this one, such emotions in this. This rocked xo

[joshua deathdealer]

Yes I can relate to the feelings in this write. It is probably my favorite from you because it's so intense. " I fear this room full of bloody hand prints" Excellent line to a wonderful poem. i love it. Well done.

[NightShade]

I feel that bouts of insanity are especially helpful to poets. Through catharsis, we transform the mental Chaos into works of Truth, Beauty and Goodness. Without such an outlet, I think the world would be drab and possibly a more dangerous place than it already is...

Oh yeah. Everyone is a bit "Insane". The people who are certain that they are completely "sane" are the ones you gotta watch out for!

[sugar]

i liked this alot the feelings here are shown well, great job