I heard Everything

I have almost given up our friendship.

I was thinking the unforgettable agony of my past

with questions running inside my mind.

It feels like everything passed so fast

And my heart feels the sadness deep inside.

 

My ears are blocked with earphones.

I was listening to music not so loud.

Sitting on a bench at the train station all alone

While thinking of everything that makes me spaced out

 

I heard a voice, it was my bestfriend calling my name

But I pretend that I didn’t hear her

She can see right through me, she can feel that I’m in pain

Because she’s always supporting me, she's always right there.

 

To her, I’m so ashamed of my own.

I know that when she can feels that I’m down.

agony, it's written all over my face, with this I always make her worry.

I don’t want to depend on her, to take away all these miseries

 

I can feel she's staring me seriously.

It’s so awkward, then out of the blue she asked

“Why is the person you fall for was never me?”

I can’t react because of the shock

 

I know she’s not joking.

I want to face her but it’s so hard

so I just left as if it was nothing

But there’s a pain inside, she’s a great friend deep in my heart

 

My most important friend

Confessed her feelings to me

I don’t want to hurt her so I just pretend

 I convinced myself that I didn’t hear anything of it

Author's Note

Its kinda related to my writing " Unheard Confession". please ignore the grammar problems. >.<

Reviews

[Boldpen]

Very lovely Poem again, just like it's counterpart.
Your idea was fantastic. Also, The expressions used are fabulous.
Great Job!

[Me]

Awesome, great writing here.

[tk]

aww.. that's so sad.. anyway, it's a very remarkable poem from you again!! i can actually imagine being in that scene.. :) you did it again!! ^_^

I can feel she's staring me seriously.
It’s so awkward, then out of the blue she asked
“Why is the person you fall for was never me?”
I can’t react because of the shock

[joshua deathdealer]

This is fantastic. Love the imagery of you sitting at the train station with your headphones on. I love the form and the way the story progresses. Awesome work..xx

[....]

My Goodness this has strength to it. I loved the last stanza. Very well written....xo

[Jeremy Baker]

An interesting, emotional write.

[sugar]

even tho it was sad i really enjoyed reading it, another great peice

[Starry Eyed]

So sad but really nicely written.

[NightShade]

Rarely in poetry are we allowed to see both sides of a scene featuring two people. This is fabulous! Thanks.

[Black]

it is so sad..