Nightfall

The Night is like another world. It is both beautiful and frightening.

The bright Sun sets down

With its fading light that makes the sky golden brown

The crickets started to hum

as the dark hours come.

 

The darkness hides the Light

but it didn’t give my heart a fright.

The night’s sweet welcome of silence

takes away all my tense.

 

Both sound and figures disappear.

The loud noises and everything are no longer there.

Even the city lights are covered in murkiness

And it makes my eyes visionless

 

In this peaceful Night,

Only shadows stay behind

These make my blood run cold

But I’m already bewitched by the beauty it holds.

Author's Note

Just ignore the grammar problems..... >.<
this poem popped in my mind when I stayed out late yesterday.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful write. I love the feel and imagery in this one..xx

[NightShade]

Oh this is a lovely piece!

[K.C. Zbryk]

very descriptive, this makes it feel as if the reader were wandering the dark with you. You captured the feel of a town going to sleep and the night taking hold, gripping the reader with your words. Very well written

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful! I love the night myself.. it seems so peaceful.. like it can be entering a dream world.. Nice imagery! I like it! =D

[....]

This is wonderful & beautiful.

[FallenWingz]

i enjoyed it i didnt still hinder on the grammar errors...i liked it alot.

[sugar]

i enjoy the night XD great poem... lovin the imagry, kinda beautifull

[AndyJCash]

Wonderful imagery, I especially like that last stanza, how we're sometimes fearful of the night but you were captured within it's beauty that it didn't matter :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A quite beautiful poem, nice penning :)

[Thea]

Smile.