Unheard Confession

I saw him sitting on a bench at the train station

He was waiting for a ride

I can feel that he’s filled with tension

But I don’t know why.

 

He was sitting there all alone.

I called him but he didn’t hear me.

He was listening music in his earphones

His face looks pessimistically.

 

I sat beside him

And I think he didn’t notice it.

The space between us is thin

That makes my heart skip a beat

 

I’m so nervous and suddenly, I blurted it out.

“Why is the person you fall for was never me?”

He didn’t react, He seems to space out.

I’m disappointed but at the same time, I'm happy that he didn’t hear anything.

 

It makes my heart goes faster with each beat and it won’t stop racing

Then the train came and he rode it.

I confessed to him my feelings.

I’m glad that he didn’t hear anything of it.

Author's Note

Just ignore the grammar problems... >.<

Reviews

[Me]

Great poem, I appreciate your ideas.

[tk]

hmmm... :) i think this poem would make a really good story.. :) this is without a doubt a fascinating and admirable piece from you!! thanks for sharing..! ^_^

[FallenWingz]

wow....this is a lovely write......i can relate to this even tho its fiction....great work

[kurdapiaful]

this could be more interesting if it's gonna be a story. . .
i like the plot :)

[SinnerInspired]

Aww are you serious!
He didn't even hear her!
Thats just so sad

[Ammanite]

aaaaw!:) cute poem i can relate to this :)

[....]

You got my attention with the first line. I love anything having to do with trains. This is quite amazing read. Thank you so much for sending me writes. I am in a reading mood today....xo

[joshua deathdealer]

Hey I really enjoyed this one. Great imagery and I love the story. Excellent work....xxx

[Lily Mae]

You did a great job with this one.. :) keep them coming..x

[sugar]

love the rhym sceme, this was great, very professional:) i loved it