Break Up

To you, it seems not right

When you couldn’t see me as often as you like

I’m fighting this sadness with all my might

So I can hold you in my arms tonight

 

You’ve been waiting through the evening

And suddenly, “I give up” you say

Because of this I’ve been crying

All night, all day

 

I tried to be strong inside

As the destiny tries to break us

You let go of my hand

That causes these tears to flow in my eyes

 

Everything we had is what I missed

I guess, we’re not meant together

The two of us, ending up like this

I thought we’d last forever.

Author's Note

I dedicate this poem to my two important friends who just broke up.
Just ignore the grammar problems.

Reviews

[lady of the canyons]

I think you do rather well with your grammer! Mine is atrocious due to years of not caring...silly me.
What a lovely dedication to friends. We feel their pain as we walk with them in life.
smiles

[Carina]

nice... :D

[Enigma]

Very nice piece. Everyone can relate to this. Perfect choice of words.

[FallenWingz]

everyone can relate to this poem lovely write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Emotionally perfect piece, love it :)

[zoeeyx]

Well, baby, you really outdid yourself.
I'm in tears here.
This is exactly like me and this boy.
Perfect.
Just, absolutely perfect.

[Subham Chatterjee]

short and true , thumbs up :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice poem.

[SinnerInspired]

Nicely done

[Thea]

Very nice tribute...Love the whole structure... :)