Wishing for Yesterday

Things in the past can never be changed

I never said it before

It shouldn’t be said

Those painful words

I don’t even want to say it.

 

I’m so blind

not to see him feel miserable

At that time, I became unkind

To him and I made mistakes unacceptable

 

He’ll hate me forever

I want to apologize, but how?

That’s right. What is there,

for him to forgive me now?

 

If only I can go back to that time

he could hear what I really want to say

Time passed but we’re not still fine

I want to turn back to yesterday

 

Author's Note

Just ignore the grammar problems.... I just want your honest comments...... ^^,

Reviews

[C.A.Jordon]

great poem. there i s always a time we would all like to change.

[Boldpen]

Great write again. Honestly, the flow of remorse and regret of this piece formed its spirit. Loved it.

[tk]

awww.. that really hurts.. >.< i can feel the pain and sadness here.. you've expressed your emotions well.. an amazing poem from you again, desmund! i loved the last stanza the most.. keep it up!

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

a poem should be something that allows the readers to think.

[....]

I know these feelings here, I have been here before. So well expressed...xo

[joshua deathdealer]

Yea it's horrible to have so much to say to someone but not having the time or the know how. I think we can all relate. Excellent work...xx

[New New]

Very well written! I enjoyed this a lot.

[Jena]

Wow, nice:)

[Jeremy Baker]

This flows really well.

[Thea]

Great poem... :)))