Remember

Our love is like living hell and also a paradise

You smile and then you shoot me

Coz I always fool around, make this love silly

I smile back and stab you

Coz your coldness makes me feel so blue

 

You always declare worthless fights

And I never step down because of my pride

We throw harsh and mean words to each other

We hurt, we scream, we cry over and over

 

In the middle of our war, I remember

Our love, you as my lover

Soon, fights are done with a passionate kiss

Coz we both know that this our Painful bliss

 

 

 

 

 

 

I shout at you and yell at me

But we’re in love even if we bleed

Author's Note

lol it's just a random topic.... ahahhaha I just felt that I am forgotten..... I wonder if someone still remember me... I mean.....aaahhh whatever.... >A<



lol hope you guys like it <3

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

Love is like a war. They can both result in happiness, sadness or both. I really like this poem and you will always be remembered, for you exist both in real life and the memories of the people that know of your existence. This poem is very well written.

Good job :D

[Desmund Tiny]

Thank you :)))))

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

some relationships THRIVE on this type of existence..Very good this...

[Queen Empress]

It clearly states to me what happened in the past :)

[SinnerInspired]

Painful Bliss...reminds me of my past relation-s***s
It's still an awesome topic

[Chris]

Welcome back - its been a while. You doing ok?

[Desmund Tiny]

yep... I'm doing fine just a bit busy for my midterms exams... ^w^

[Coyote Poetry]

Love and war. Some people need both in a relationship. I like calm and peace. A very interesting poem. I like the conflict and the strong ending.
"I shout at you and yell at me
But we’re in love even if we bleed"
No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote