Sound of Rain

Sound of Rain

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

We met and fell in love on a rainy day.....

"

I came to the usual café

Ordered one hot and creamy Choco Latte

It used to be two orders

When I used to come here with you, my lover

 

Outside the window, rain started to hit the pavement

Reminding me of our sweet and bitter moments

I can hear your voice in the sound of rain

I tried to forget but it all comes back, the pain

 

In this passing wind, we used to cuddle each other

Now I’m fighting this loneliness in this cold weather

I hurt you with my words, throw away all my feelings

I can live without you, I think I’m lying

 

I always think of you as I fall asleep

But in this rainy night, I won’t be able to sleep

You’re always remain in my heart

Now you are a sharp fragment tearing me apart

 

 

Will this rain erase all my regrets?

Dear sky I wish the rain would stop so that I can forget

On a rainy day, I fell for you

On a rainy night, I broke you

 

 

© 2013 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
"I buried the love in farewell" ~B.A.P.
^w^ lols it's been a long time since the last time I wrote a poem... hahahah hope you like it.... ^w^Y

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"I can hear your voice in the sound of rain

I tried to forget but it all comes back, the pain



In this passing wind, we used to cuddle each other

Now I’m fighting this loneliness in this cold weather"

A poem of bittersweet beauty and longing...Bravo


Posted 11 Years Ago


Very sweet and sad. I almost cried because i went through the same feeling of loss.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I remember you my Poet friend. A very sad poem. Hard to go to places where love and life was once celebrated. I like the description of location, the rain and the loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

11 Years Ago

oh thanks for the comment... I really missed writer's cafe.... ^w^
Contradicting emotions. Yes-no.
Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mixture of emotions...greatly portrayed...
great write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2013
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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