Rain Dance

 Under your dress, hairless God’s of forever



Spit up and down my neck, the dribble is soft

asking for anything else, it's a sin among sinners

for my questions, answers, for yours, nothing else

if I left my bags behind after my journey in

I would sleep on your heart, and make myself at last

for god's to commit under cardinal sin

we have to move, do it, f**k fast,

before they see us dripping from the clouds,

God's rain is blessing under fleshy constructs

excess of exchange, converging of brains, in basic

bare-back in bare-bones synapse

I collapse to the last o' thunder-claps,

o' moan! o' cries! o' deep breaths under f***s and gods, o' gods!

Yes!

Yes, lightning strikes, oh let it rain, o' let the rain wash it away!

Beneath the titans, children o' Olympia drink our rain,

tongues extended to catch every perfect drop of mana!

O' children, o' seed, inherit my sins, inherit lives lived and passed!

O' children, under our cardinal sin, under rain clouds of purity, under parents of scrutiny,

O' children, under the watchful eye of school teachers and lawyers, and judges, and Presidents, 



O' children, under the rain, borne unto sin, somewhere between flesh and flesh, Find your way home!

O' children, your gods come from books. Gods are born of paper and ink, between reality and complex.

O' children, drink, drink of Titan's milk, drink of the sky its-self, indulge in our gifts, for you are not long for this world.

O' children, learn to love, learn to dance the rhythms of your body, learn devotion, learn to hum drum beats, and spit poetry.
Salted sea water drapes over our bodies, in every suction we gather electric between kisses and convulsions,



dripping into each other's, mouths, rain dance, rain dance.



O' children, rain dance with us.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This piece mixes human nature and mythology very well. "O' children, your gods come from books. Gods are born of paper and ink, between reality and complex." You have given your readers new gods, beings between mortal and immortal. You also allow for of "insert your destiny here" and partake in the ecstasy of this joyous dance. This is a beautiful piece.

[Butterflymom]

WOW, this is an awesome, and well expressed piece. I like the intensity. This is very well penned, and I enjoyed it immensely. I will come back to this and reread it again.

[Jackson Krauss Blind Pa..]

I really like your use of perspective, makes you see the whole event not from those most suffering, but maybe those most needing to suffer, to live. Very cool!