8:14

existence

Cause we never knew

that everything was so beautiful
Just everything around us

It breathes and dances
folds into one another
and if only we could find it

There inside one another

But you can't understand

No one is going
to understand
The way their voices
pour out

it's lovely

Oh it is so
inconceivably lovely

Reviews

[Robin]

this is one of those moments that radiates from the heart and those rays of light sing

[alan peter kelly]

i love this poem...i think that you can do away with the word "cause" at the beginning though this is just my opinion...i hope you do not mind my input :) you are an inspiration and i truly love your writes @-

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You wrote with the sincerity of a person gathering their last words. What a gift it is to be able to be graced with your inspirational words everyday.