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Poet-tree

 

 

Faces

 

harsh, with judgements

 

made

 

Jeering

 

as the laughter

 

fades

 

Quiet and Coy

 

It shadows all

 

and then the

 

Mighty

 

Do not

 

Fall

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brad]

well constructed, the guts of this one does the title much justice

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting

[Ruth]

And after all the "jeering" they still remain standing.....beautifully written love xx

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful`~

[AngelAfterlife]

this is a great poem.. Keep up the good work... use your emotion to pull out more words to express yourself.

[Bard Constantine]

I like your rhyming poetry of late. You have an ear for it, and your flow never sounds forced. This short piece comes across as quite powerful. Nicely done...