Excuse Me, Do I know you?

 

 

It's like your voice

 on the end of the line

I have no choice

  but to smile

        and lie

          to myself cause

I have no regrets

  you don't remember but

 you didn't

forget

 

 

(Chorus) Let me go, You've said a thousand times

but I can't and I just don't know why

 Oh I'll never know why

 

Please excuse me

  Can I ask you again

Were you my

  enemy or were you my

                        friend

I'm not sure

       if I'm right about this s**t

but its just

   a matter of

Physical

 gain

 

We may be different but

 its one in the same

 

(Chorus x2)

I don't even know why

I can't quit, No I don't even try

 

Because I love

  the feelings that I get

When I'm alone

   and I'm writing

this s**t

The thoughts that pass

       In and out

of my mind

  Are what keep me

from wond.ering

why

 

 I can't quit, I don't even try

Yeah I've never tried

 

Author's Note

The third song I've written
this one has a much different concept than the others
and also has a different sound, like a raspy, grungy tone with
stoner psychedelic riffs
This one is like addictive love, or the relationship between an addict and his drug abuse..

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love the flow~ and feeling that moves it~

[Rikkevi Rue]

Well having written several hundred songs I know that the lyrics may or may not make the song. The music is certainly a significant part of the piece, but there are some lyrics which are just plain "flat" and then there are those that grab you by the throat and demand attention! These are pretty good and depending on the emotional impact of the whole song could be even better...If you only read the lyrics to the Rolling Stones "Satisfaction" you'd probably say eahh- so what! but it is one of the biggest hits of all time.

I particularly like the opening verse. It gets the hook in there right off the bat. It would be good if you echoed that verse again later in the song, or even repeated parts of it...but then it wouldn't be the song YOU created, and it is kinda unique just the way it is! Good job MoonF

[Robin]

cool , I wanna hear the music ..

[OutsideSyntax]

Good to see you working on songs, think you got a talent for them