Stalemate Bandits

I wish that I could reach you,
seep into some hidden pocket of the mind
and really know what you are thinking
That delicate silence, smooth lips sealed
in permanence
I can't feel the warmth of a smile,
the tenderness of your skin against my own

Where have you been these days
of molten sorrow and fleeting
aggravations

Deciding not to brave the storm,
to face these trials and tribulations
without my presence close beside you

A heart of lead and steel will get you
far in this world
but I'm not sure if that is what
you're looking for

Maybe just a clean pair of blue jeans,
a few crumpled parchments, a pen behind your ear,
safe in the pocket that envelopes
your electric current mind

I always hoped to hold your simplicity,
your stubborn emptiness within
my vicinities

We're losing touch, letting that ever folding
branch snap beneath the force of the wind,
if you find this world too frigid and uncomfortable
by then...
maybe you will turn around and remember

that I was standing behind you
whenyou walked away, with
Folded arms and a shuddering wing span

If I asked you to stay for one more night
would you tell me no, again?

It isn't time to let go, but I think you already have

Reviews

[Hippy]

sad yet powerful, your great use of words and amazes me along with your metaphors they just seem to flow, so much truth is pours out here the simplicity of man and how people are different and shows your kindness and caring so much could be said but ill just leave it at i like this its a good piece of art

[Kelley]

The pain of letting go is sometimes harder that the loss it self.
Great job on this one Moonflower I think I might write something tonight.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[KL]

I think this is one of my favourites of yours. Frustrating to think that no matter how well you know somebody, there are still things that you may NEVER know, that there are walls you may never be able to climb over. Very rarely you have 100% of an individual.

[Isolophobe]

This is going to leave me in the stranglehold of nostalgia. Once more, expertly written.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the sorrow seeps with the draw of your lines~ deeply moving~excellent expressions throughout~

[Nobody.]

Beautiful write. the sadness bites through.

[The Silver Chord]

Good style. You definitely hit the sorrowful undertones with this one. Good job.

[Brad]

ooo, this is sad and cutting...much like my own poem i wrote called "bubble'. a hopeless cacophony of yearning to be with someone who's already gone

[Robin]

your melancholic tomes permeate ~ another great piece of writing

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You break my heart. This poem really got to me.