a black heart does not exist in someone who can write like this...darkened...overshadowed...in eclipse perhaps but never black...we cannot hope to succeed until we first learn how to fail...for it is the pain of our mistakes that scar or calcify as foundations for as ultimate a growth as we can ever hope in one lifetime...if we survive the beasts...then we become kings and queens...as always...enjoyed your skill...
oh wow.this is very good. the emotions and thoughts intertwining throughout give a real sense of the situation. mistakes are the bulk of what life is.
great write.
the best work is so real to us that we are there, and experience what the writer experienced, feel what he or she felt- first, before we think of our own experiences that are similar. When I read your little precious gem here first i am there, and it is MY experience...then I realize it is actually yours and it is so genuinely and sincerely voiced, and so seamlessly crafted you have drawn me effortlessly into your world...unlike the others i believe your heart was black at that moment before love or whatever emotion invaded it, for is not a life or heart without love black like the darkness of night...
Suddenly felt like quoting Savatage's song "No regrets, if you just forget, If a memory is lenient, you can find it most convenient, so you let it fade, till it's very vague, jst a silhouette of shadows, but the shadows are still lingering"
true the sweetest mistakes can be bitter, although we think things are perfect just until we comment that mistake, either by a word or a deed, and we wish to stop time at that very moment to avoid results.
great piece, very touching ... well done dear
Whoa. Geez I don't know what I can say about this... looks like all the past comments have summed up what I'd say, so i guess all I can say to this is, it totally pwns life. It sounds immature but seriously, it's just insanely amazing I can't find the right words to explain it... LOVED IT. :O
Excellent job!
not blackened at all...to feel such emotion...such pain...one must have a heart that glows with the radiant knowledge of love...
mistakes must be made...for each is a stepping stone to one's future
this is a beautiful display of tangled heartstrings...
i truly enjoy your work dear
Live and learn...mistakes are the brick and mortar of character and identity I think. And many times....with time and emotion under our belt and out of our way, what seemed like a mistake then was truly just the way things needed to happen, no mistake at all. This was beautifully written with consideration and a bit of punch. Nice work.
Hello :)
My name is Desiree.
What brings me to this website is my love for poetry and storytelling. At this time I consider myself more of a poet, than a writer or author.
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