Midnight Serenades

 

 

 

You'll find her beneath the willow tree
Softly praying on her knees

Under midnight skies she swoons
Crying out to her father Moon

Coyote meets her solemn call
Howling his melancholy song

Fairies meet her in the night
Sighing with her precious sight

They dance beneath the Willow tree
Singing of that far away sea

Where lands of beauty have crystal skies
and their Mother laughs with twinkling eyes

She bows her head and Sings in praise
Remembering that hallow place

The willow sighs with tender leaves
as she prepares to take her leave

Into the night she slowly waits
for her Mother to bind her fate

 

 

 

Author's Note

For the darkness, it does call...

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

your way of writing reminds me by the lovely Amy lee.
You have the talent. Breathtaking inspiration, specific words create such an outstanding imagination.
i felt sad when i was reading it... You tame the reader's mind (at least for me)
i like your poems :) Keep it up
hope someday to hear one of your poems in a song :) really hope so :)
I cherish "Midnight Serenades" :)

[Matthew Kult]

Thought it was great. Everything flowed well, and I do love dancing under willow trees.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. In the quiet and peace of the night. There is the music of the night for us to hear. I like the story and the feel of the poem. I like when I can spend time with nature and her mystery. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Charles]

Nice mix of the gentle and the haunting.

[Michael X]

deep wiccan enchantment, to which you are the master of,
you have a really great way with flow and rhythm,
really spellbound and the styizing nature beckons beautifully.
this is awsome, thanks for sharing your talent.

[Kelley]

I thought you were into the female deity....smiles.
This poem was perfect. The only thing i might change would be
the line "Crying out to her father Moon" I would change it to
"Crying out to her Mother Moon' I think it sounds better.

Anyway great poem. Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Brad]

i actually have this vision but usually involves a joshua tree, and instead of faeries i am visited by the dead.
very medivel in it's telling, great job!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful poem. I can really see the characters in the stanza's. Great, great job.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This would make an enchanting song. This is truly a beautiful
landscape.

[David W Moore III]

A truly beautiful write, The phrasings are fabtastic, and the imagery, sublime. I love it!

Yes, it does call. I wonder if it still uses a rotary phone.