Just about right

Just about right

A Poem by Moonflower

 

 

 

 

I'm not sure how many times

my heart

 

has just stopped beating, since

 

I met You

 

 

And I'm beggining to believe

 

that it is

 

bad for my health.

 

 

Who can ever tell?

© 2010 Moonflower


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Sweet, it sounds like the beginning of falling in love.. nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely... that feeling is so rare, especially when times are so cynical, and no one is to be trusted... or so it seems. I think it's a horrible thing called reality that messes it all up...

Posted 14 Years Ago


And who really cares when it skips for a good cause and feels so extraordinary. I hate when that feeling goes away. It is such a high no one wishes to come down from.

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple enough. awesome job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Moonflower
Moonflower

Louisville, KY



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