I felt the warmth of your smile

 

 

We laughed the night away

and

You made love to me beneath

a star scattered sky

 

I'll never let this go

even though

Summer faded into Autumn

with those

warm, eastern winds

 

Your face was reflected

against the water

rippling with our voices

 

I sighed and took your hand

Loving the feel of skin against skin

fingertips dancing

to the rhythm of our foot steps

 

Lets watch the seasons change

and I'll hold your image in my grasp

Empty pockets won't hold back

our happiness

 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. I love the collage of emotions and ideas.
It all blended together beautifully.

[Sweets]

I loved it :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

And so you inspire me again. :]

[Jonathan De Elvira]

awwwwwww....

if that one person was meant so much to us than forever he/she will be missed...

liked it...

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes being young. hopeful and filled with great desire. No better days in a life. Need those night on quiet beaches and private rooms where time is not the enemy. The poem is very beautiful. Description and story was outstanding.
Coyote

[loowzerX]

awhh :)))

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

tactile and beautiful~ a tranquil moving poetic that fills the reader with the sensations being expressed~

[Cynthia]

A nice poem!!!
Sweet.

empty pockets and full hearts.

[Matthews Reggie]

sweet, perfect imagery, creating visuals of beauty, i liked the last line: empty pockets...... the whole poem is realy well writtn... an entertaining read...