I felt the warmth of your smile

 

 

We laughed the night away

and

You made love to me beneath

a star scattered sky

 

I'll never let this go

even though

Summer faded into Autumn

with those

warm, eastern winds

 

Your face was reflected

against the water

rippling with our voices

 

I sighed and took your hand

Loving the feel of skin against skin

fingertips dancing

to the rhythm of our foot steps

 

Lets watch the seasons change

and I'll hold your image in my grasp

Empty pockets won't hold back

our happiness

 

Reviews

[Steve]

i like how real and honest this one is.......and sweet too!

[alan khan]

this was great. idc for cutsie poems normally but this just had such emotion in it. awesome job.

[*]

I can see why so many people liked this poem. I like reading your poetry nice and slow in order to take in every word and I'm never dissapointed. The suggestion of the last line was priceless.

[stars are far]

it really a nice romantic beautiful song .
keep going

[Pax Analog]

Delicate amorous dream feeling.

Cool reflection -- in water and in mind -- caresses the warmth of passion and summer.

Love, passion, and memory fill the pockets of the heart, ever trumping pockets empty of moolah.

[alan peter kelly]

the empty pockets line is a corker...and a rarity to hear from a woman haha...half my problems with women involve lack of funds to meet them!!! no...once maybe...im taken...but it is nevertheless a most impressive line...the delicacy of your writes are always true to the you i have come to know through their tender reflections...lucky is the whoever of whom you write and lucky you for knowing such sensation...

[Omar Fendri]

oww! Spoken romance :) Very beautiful and the last stanza is fabulous. I adore this one. I like that your poems are inspired from realities and memories. :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Beautiful....yes that last line is brilliant indeed...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Oh and that last line 'empty pockets won't hold back our happiness',that took my breath away.Some amazing poetry here..

[Crow]

Beautiful sedate imagery, a wonderful piece.