No one's coming

 

 

 

Exquisite pools, are they in your eyes

Spilling over into restless seas,

I see the darkness, deep and wide

Have we ended all misery

 

With this tiny drop, we're measuring

Is it snowing underneath the tree tops,

blinding blue invades your sleep

I'm not trying to deny you

I never meant to fall so deep,

 

We're

turning into something so different,

Illumination, broadened mind

I'm not sure what it is made of

Have you seen the clouds, the vines

 

Is this what Alice was sure to speak of

Standing tall amongst the trees

I see them breathing in the distance

I think they're calling out to me

 

Mother Mary, Guide your servant

I'm among the roses, high

I look upon the empty river

and see so many things go by

 

Let the tulips be my mercy,

 We'll climb to the tops of every building

And shout our names out into the city

As the rooftops begin melting

 

I'm not trying to forgive you,

to smile at your climbing highs

Lets just lay down a while, darling

Underneath our dragon skies

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've poured youself so deeply into this deeply moving and visually stunning write~

[loowzerX]

the weirdness makes it all even more amazing :)

[Robin]

your heart through the looking glass

[Cynthia]

This may sounds weird, but as I see,
it's a nice poem!

[Glarthir]

I like it! It gives a sort of nostalgic-like feeling, and I dig that.

[Crazy Cat Man]

weird ones are good.....its good to write and not to think too much about it :)