I'll love you when...

 

 

 

 

 

I'll love you
as the wind blows
you far away from me

And as your eyes
look wearily
At graceful,
waving seas

I'll love you
as the branches sway
and dance along the shore
Then when you sigh
and let me go
I'll lay down
forever more

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[sushi]

Cute poem..... I loved it....

[Ashesh]

In love there is not always ache but there is comfort too. Nice poem.

[Ashley]

its a cute poem

[al]

niiiice. poignant poignatn poignant. dig it.

[Poetry Girl]

this is a very good writing

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Each set of lines making the story more strong and powerful. The emotion of love overflowed in the poem. Love should be like a waterfall. Powerful and unstoppable. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[J]

~gorgeous poem~
~that second verse and the last 2 lines are so emotional :)

`i love it~

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Beautiful...like a melody..lovely rhythym...full of love and melancholia

[Michael X]

wow, you've threaded the continuous tapestry of poetry through
inspiration, I could feel a sense of classic style and reverberation,
beautiful, dreamy, lulling and keep up the great work.

[Bard Constantine]

softly beautiful in its simplicity... yet overflowing with emotion. Lovely...