Dying Flame

 

 

 

Maybe...I will die

 

And then these words will echo

 

Forever in your minds

 

I'm a shadow on the wall

 

A flickering flame

 

One day I will go out,

 

Never to return again

Reviews

[Sports Girl]

Short but good. Sad but i liked it

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Again, a depressing write...
Hurm, but this one quite sad and softer than before...

Even though it's short, but it was enough to tell the message...
I liked it..

[Jeff]

It's very sad, but I can feel it. We all want to be remembered.

[Miss Coral]

Simple, but powerful.
Love the subtle rhyme scheme... it seemed a little bit abrupt to me, but perhaps that was intentional.
And did you mean *dying* in the title?

Nice write.
-Coral-

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem speaks for every artist who wishes to leave behind a legacy.
Very nice work! This is a perfect way to get people to understand.

[Ashesh]

Insightful! .. thanks for sharing.

[Randolf Ramos]

Yes, but the reality that we took flesh gives exhilaration of joy!
The best thing in life!

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your words are powerful and you convey much in a short piece, which in my opinion is harder than a long drawn out poem..well done

[nono]

Short, but the message is clear very nice job! Your writing is improving extremely fast!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Direct and to the point. I wonder what pain I would cause if I disappears and never came back? I don't know. I believe better to torture the person and be hanging near. A excellent poem.
Coyote