Just Tonight

 

I sit here next to you,

smoking my fresh, green marijuana,

inhaling smugly.

 

You're the picture of perfection, My love.

 

 

Reviews

[sushi]

Cute and lovely...

[Aimee Mahathy]

Aww, how I know this feeling. :3
And it's wonderful indeed.
I don't think you could've written this any better! The pause in between the smug inhale, and the reflection, is wonderful. I can almost see it.

[Crinkle°]

so cute! you're a woman in love ;o)

[CherryBomb]

Haikus are hard to write and illustrate into focus.. I enjoyed this. I would love to see you write a haiku about love and romance, those are my favorite topic... Great Write!

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I like it.. thought it was quite sweet

[Taylor H.]

I liked this..other than the marijuana part but thats ok lol I liked it

[Pax Analog]

I found myself wondering if this should be assayed as a 5-7-5 syllable haiku.

Nothing like a well-timed toke for one seasoned in such things -- and noting it for posterity.

Did the "picture of perfection" provide the maryjane, or was just a welcome companion to a smoky epiphany? ;-)

Regardless, it's a fine moment. Best thing about maryjane, timing, good company -- such moments. Tasty!

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

love this. perfect picture!

[Randolf Ramos]

Love ahhh, gives us excitement and adrenaline rush like puffing marijuana as you may say! love indeed is like a drug that brings us into psychedelic trance.

[Poetry Girl]

hmm... im going to be honest. i didnt see a good meaning in the poem. it seems like you just kind of... wrote stuff. and its really short so it doesnt tell me a lot. im not trying to be mean, but thats just what i think. it could use... work