Forever

He says he would like to Marry me

beneath

A weeping willow tree

The stars a witness to our binds

The moon a silent concubine

You'll say your words and I'll say mine

Hands and hearts forever intertwined

 

Is this your wish? My darling, my Heart

 

For us to wed and never part

 

Reviews

[al25]

Wow! This is really good. I can imagine people would buy something like this to say as their wedding vows. Very well written.

[Akshat♥]

short & sweet are two words for this good poem of yours....this poem has a nice flow...excellant work..keep writing:)

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Awwwww...
so sweet....
and simple...

[Ruth]

A beautiful piece hon:)
I like the turn around to questioning at the end, wonderful!
xx

[Cynthia]

That's a great poem!
It's sweet, short...
The Flow is really great inside this poem,
I love this very much!

[Crusaderscross]

Very good poem here. You say everything thatnhas to be said. The simplicity is whatnmakes this piece work. Really quite innocent. Loved it.

[Brittany W]

Sweet and short, i loved it, nice job.

[Sports Girl]

This is sweet. I liked it a lot. Great job

[Dream Weaver]

Sharpe and well structured
Truly a devine write.....

[mmzx]

aww.
i like the whole poem.
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