Forever

He says he would like to Marry me

beneath

A weeping willow tree

The stars a witness to our binds

The moon a silent concubine

You'll say your words and I'll say mine

Hands and hearts forever intertwined

 

Is this your wish? My darling, my Heart

 

For us to wed and never part

 

Reviews

[sushi]

"You'll say your words and I'll say mine
Hands and hearts forever intertwined
Is this your wish? My darling, my Heart
For us to wed and never part"

Short but sweet. A beautiful story, may they never part...

[alan peter kelly]

lovely piece...romantic...rhyming couplets work a treat...the flow is perfecto :)

[Pax Analog]

"The stars a witness to our binds/The moon a silent concubine/You'll say your words and I'll say mine/Hands and hearts forever intertwined"

These lovely song-sounding words form the lyrical heart of your fine romantic wedding brood.

[loowzerX]

awww this is rly sweet. :)

[Bard Constantine]

Although simpler than your usual, this still has depth of feeling. Love the words, love the passion...

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I loved this one..

[Jeff]

Lovely poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Simply romantic... with the right words you don't need many as you just proved.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

sweet emotion.

[Citizen Erased]

This is lovely.