Where I'll Be

I wonder what you're doin

way out there

Are you looking at the stars?

I wish that you were here

lieing in my arms

 

And I've found that lonliness

some where alone the lines

Is what reminds us of

the Love we've held inside

 

 

Well I hope its nice out there,

beyond the city lines

Well, I hope its beautiful there,

the place you rest your eyes

(chorus)

 

 

Do you ever wonder

what it's like to be alone

How it feels to know

you'll never have a home

 

If it bothers you than

you don't have to write

I know we'll meet again

some other place and time

 

(chorus x2)

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is officially my first song...working on getting my boyfriend to help me record it :)

Reviews

[Sports Girl]

I like this a lot.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I thought ur singing something about me though :P Lol!!!
nah, I'm joking XD....Seems like a good song, it'll be really nice if u can share it with others as well...

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

i love it!!

[Aven]

Very lyrical. :)

[Cynthia]

I love this, although I don't really know know how song is done.

[Miss Coral]

I like it. :)
While I was reading it, I noticed that it had a different rhythm to it than your other work, almost song like. I smiled when I saw your Author's Note. :)

Really nice piece.. I love the subtle rhyme scheme.. really pulls it all together. Great job.