Where I'll Be

I wonder what you're doin

way out there

Are you looking at the stars?

I wish that you were here

lieing in my arms

 

And I've found that lonliness

some where alone the lines

Is what reminds us of

the Love we've held inside

 

 

Well I hope its nice out there,

beyond the city lines

Well, I hope its beautiful there,

the place you rest your eyes

(chorus)

 

 

Do you ever wonder

what it's like to be alone

How it feels to know

you'll never have a home

 

If it bothers you than

you don't have to write

I know we'll meet again

some other place and time

 

(chorus x2)

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is officially my first song...working on getting my boyfriend to help me record it :)

Reviews

[Ashesh]

This is Blockbuster! :) .. really I like to listen to it someday with just a guitar and a vocal like Joan Baez.
You captured the melancholy so eloquently. I could feel the ache while reading. Thanks for sharing.

[Poetry Girl]

reading this, it really did play like a song. but its also a good poem. if you do record it, you should put it on youtube.com and then post the link here so i can listen :)

[Bard Constantine]

It reads like a song, far better than others I've read online. Hope you share the full version after you record it...

[Broken Branches]

I'd be interested in hearing it as a whole if you ever hook up the keys. I've been involved in music for a long time. Nice lyrics.

[Pax Analog]

I'd love to hear it.

Haunting, simple, classic, timeless.

At times, one's heart can break just from being alive.

[Brittany W]

the words went very well together, this would make a fantastic song.

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

Sweet :-)

[Norma M Sutton]

It's nice.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

It sounds very good. I like this.

[vincentbals]

Nicely written, i like it.