Abstract Lives

We were born

 

Crawling out of the

Illusions

 

I never knew

 

You

were Here.

 

Waiting for

my arrival

 

Time

is just an

acquiescent

 

Flooding over,

Pulling Tides

 

The Moon rose

High

over roof tops

 

Houses all

in a row

 

What if we didn't

 

...exist?

 

My Love,

My confidant.

 

There isn't any

explanation

 

For this.

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Spare, eloquent, haunting. Spelling: "acquiescent."

What strikes this reader is the contrast between "Abstract Lives" and the delicate soulfulness of the poem, underlining the strangeness of existence, that observation is not merely detached, but subtly feels.

Elegant and beautiful.

[sushi]

Sweet and beautiful....

[Tony]

Superb.
A concept articulated and compressed perfectly.

[Poetry Girl]

this has a really great feel to it. i liked the way you wrote it too. its like you seperated a lot of the main parts. im sorry, i dont really know what else to say. i cant put how great i think it is into words. but you're a really great poet and i know this from revewing so much of your work. keep it up.

[Young Mountain]

The title suited the theme well.
What if we didn't



...exist?



My Love,

My confidant.

Something so beautiful about this, it really sits with me.

Nice Job

[SilentDreamer]

Very haunting, memorable, deep and dark. Flows well and makes you wonder. Love this, great job. Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Something we can't explain. i have been blessed with good friends and they came out of no-where with the gift of friendship and love. I like this poem. The way you write the poem made this so good. I believe we need a lot of luck and hope to survive in this life. Good people allow our journey to be better. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[.quan.011.]

I enjoyed reading this peom.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. i like this. good emotion flow constient energy and emotion trail very good

[Citizen Erased]

Wow, this is great. Well done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

striking imagery. You really put on a show.
Im impressed.