Dust to Dust
A Poem by
Moonflower
My body
bears
these symbols
Vast and yet,
Unknown
Yin
Lady Moon
thy
Ocean Tides
With out
Darkness
There isn't
Light
Ankh
Our Eternal
Life
My Soul
Buried
within
Flesh
...Ashes to Ashes...
Snake
coiled around
Skin
Protector
God of sweet
Salvation.
Come to me.
I bear these
Markings
Engraved
with Ink
Imprinted
In my Spirit
...Dust to Dust...
© 2010 Moonflower
Author's Note
Concept and word play.
Reviews
I love this..You used all the great symbols entailing life...balance...and somehow put them all together into a meaningful set of words...amazing piece
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nicely done love!
A great poem!
The balance of energy, the essence of life!
I LOVE this!
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nicely done love!
A great poem!
The balance of energy, the essence of life!
I LOVE this!
xx
It's interesting when a symbol becomes mere decoration to those who bypass the meaning simply bear a cool looking design... one thinks of tattoos, medallions, and the like. Nicely written, it makes one think...
Posted 14 Years Ago
It's interesting when a symbol becomes mere decoration to those who bypass the meaning simply bear a cool looking design... one thinks of tattoos, medallions, and the like. Nicely written, it makes one think...
It has visual power also. Accurate words triggered a random fast paced images as I read it. Wonderful.
Posted 14 Years Ago
It has visual power also. Accurate words triggered a random fast paced images as I read it. Wonderful.
this is very creative. well done, i liked it
Posted 14 Years Ago
this is very creative. well done, i liked it
Great write. Really like the words you used here. Makes you really think about the poem. Enjoyed reading this. Good job.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great write. Really like the words you used here. Makes you really think about the poem. Enjoyed reading this. Good job.
Wow... That's all I can say. Wow.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow... That's all I can say. Wow.
It's interesting. A little above my understanding, but the imagery is unique.
Posted 14 Years Ago
It's interesting. A little above my understanding, but the imagery is unique.
Good job. Accomplished your goal.
~LL~
Posted 14 Years Ago
Good job. Accomplished your goal.
~LL~
it's all about the word play! Jason Mraz has a song called word play, you should check it out! It's as awesome as this poem ;)
Posted 14 Years Ago
it's all about the word play! Jason Mraz has a song called word play, you should check it out! It's as awesome as this poem ;)
first
prev
1
Stats
252 Views
16 Reviews
Added on August 20, 2010
Last Updated on August 20, 2010
Author
Moonflower Louisville, KY
About
Hello :)
My name is Desiree.
What brings me to this website is my love for poetry and storytelling. At this time I consider myself more of a poet, than a writer or author.
I do not have the pa..
more..
Writing
Related Writing
People who liked this story also liked..