Very nice, I can't believe more people havn't reviewed it yet. Sometimes I thought that you made a paus a little too soon, in the flow of the text, but as I think about it, it does have a charm. I wouldn't change a thing. I think it's a really beautiful, down to earth poem. Thanks. :)
It's certainly those small, intimate moments that can recall memories we thought banished; thoughts of bygone yesterday that announces its presence by that bittersweet yearning that can catch us by surprise... this poem definitely brings that feeling to life.
Hello :)
My name is Desiree.
What brings me to this website is my love for poetry and storytelling. At this time I consider myself more of a poet, than a writer or author.
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