It's only for a little while, darling.

It's only for a little while, darling.

A Poem by Moonflower

I walk

down spring street

going in

store to store

 

I stop at the

book store and

read, ponder

 

...sigh...

 

The sun is shining

warm, not too

bright

 

The antique shop

is homey,

reminds me of

child hood

 

I wish you were

here, so

we could exchange

memories

 

I look at the ground

 

one pair of tattered

shoes

on the pavement

 

My heart flutters

in remembrance

 

and I realize

...I wish you were here.

© 2010 Moonflower


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heart felt emotion , described in your unique way

Posted 14 Years Ago


i enjoy your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This has reflective memories in it. They are nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Strange enough,
I thought I heard ur talking while reading this..

The title got me confuse for awhile but then after second read it does make sense..
Nice read...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice, I can't believe more people havn't reviewed it yet. Sometimes I thought that you made a paus a little too soon, in the flow of the text, but as I think about it, it does have a charm. I wouldn't change a thing. I think it's a really beautiful, down to earth poem. Thanks. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's certainly those small, intimate moments that can recall memories we thought banished; thoughts of bygone yesterday that announces its presence by that bittersweet yearning that can catch us by surprise... this poem definitely brings that feeling to life.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Moonflower
Moonflower

Louisville, KY



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