It's only for a little while, darling.

I walk

down spring street

going in

store to store

 

I stop at the

book store and

read, ponder

 

...sigh...

 

The sun is shining

warm, not too

bright

 

The antique shop

is homey,

reminds me of

child hood

 

I wish you were

here, so

we could exchange

memories

 

I look at the ground

 

one pair of tattered

shoes

on the pavement

 

My heart flutters

in remembrance

 

and I realize

...I wish you were here.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Ah memories of child hood

[Alicia Schroeder]

memories are alway's great, but feel so much better when they are shared with someone, very nice work

[CherryBomb]

It brings back memorries of the loved ones i miss, Great

[Young Mountain]

A soulful reminder with a little heartbreak of loved ones.


Thanks for sharing

[al25]

Again another well written piece by you. You didn't write about much but the oem still worked. Great job.

[Dream Weaver]

A sentimental write down memory lane...
Nicely done...

[loowzerX]

so unique.

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Very simple, and different from your usual style. I really do like it. It has a sense of bittersweet love, and indifference. Great job as usual!!

[Cynthia]

Enjoy, and it is nice.

[Miss Coral]

So simple, but the emotion is conveyed throughout the piece.. it's almost like a longing for something more, even though it's perfect for someone else. Really beautiful piece. 100/100 from me.