hallucinatory thought-speaking

 

You'll find

that

 

Im.balance

 

is possible

this time of year

 

When you choose to hang

your head

 

When every thing

is so

 

...unclear...

 

And if madness

is a game

 

would you not wish to play?

 

I think you

would...regret

 

Having any thing

to say

 

I'll force

those

thoughts inside

 

Shove them

deep

into your brain

 

And when you find 

the darkness

 

there

 

You'll feel a bit insane.

Author's Note

blahh..just thinking, inspired by dreams and random bull shi-it ;)

Reviews

[sushi]

Great work!!!

"And if madness
is a game
would you not wish to play?"

Thanks for sharing. Keep writing more....

[Aven]

dreams and random bull shi-it make the best inspiration ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime our dreams can overtake our mind. Make us crazy. I never tell anyone they are crazy. I have done many crazy things in my life. I would do more if I could. I like the feel of this poem. Next year If possible I want to ride the winter storms of California one more time. I dream to be in the large waves feeling peace with the sea. Very dangerous but no better high. No-one is insane. Just not afraid of testing the boundaries.
Coyote

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I definitely love the flow of your writing it's edgy and with deep moods

[Charles]

Insanity is the norm...I'm just waiting for the rest of the world to know normal :)

[.quan.011.]

We all get inspired by dreams, great peom!

[Ruth]

This is great!
Autumnal darkness always unsettles the thoughts!
You have portrayed that so well here! A stream of thought that hits hard and it works well!
xx

[Brittany W]

This was an interesting piece, it makes you ponder, nice job.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is philosophy almost, well the way you put it. Good, good. :]

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

hahahahahaha ew good one clever little psychotic sublime. cute little light creepin big trip but enormous yet still cute