I didn't mean it

I told you, harshly,

that december

Breaking nails on

windshields and

burning bushes

 

I don't want this.

 

You looked at me

wrinkle eyed and

flabbergasted

 

I could tell you were

always

taken aback

by my random insults

and instigations

 

Humorous yet, unfullfilling.

 

I was always a sad wrap

a seed in

the wind, blowing along

with the trash and inconsistencies.

 

Don't let me fall inlove with you,

it would be against my

own will.

 

And I always thought

you took that statement

for granted.

 

But who can ever tell?

Reviews

[Bard Constantine]

Describes perfecty the tangled knot of emotions that comes of a conflicted relationship. Feelings teeter back and forth, a razor that slices both ways. Great writing...

[al25]

Great job as usual. Very well written.

[FlawedByDesign]

The poem has a really nice flow to it and it upholds from stanza to stanza, even with the shortness of the stanzas and the breaks.

The write comes across as a piece about unrequited love and while I can formulate opinions as to what the poem is talking about, I cannot come to a clear conclusion.

Well done.

[Sonia]

Nice. I really liked this

[CherryBomb]

Amazing!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

perfection in composition~ this is a tightly written~ highly skilled piece~ the words simply blend flawlessly~as if they were always meant to be there~

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Such a wonderful piece, I truly am a bit jealous I can't write as well!! Like always, it's a beautiful poem.

~But who can ever tell?~

[alan peter kelly]

this is my favourite write by you so far...everything is in the right place and flows as stream with absolutely no obstructions...a fine poem...it has been faved :)

[loowzerX]

another great piece :)

[KatiePie]

I've never read a piece with a flow quite like this and it was an experience, because I enjoyed it and its easy going yet so full of emotions, that combination right there leaves the reader wanting more. Great write!