I didn't mean it

I told you, harshly,

that december

Breaking nails on

windshields and

burning bushes

 

I don't want this.

 

You looked at me

wrinkle eyed and

flabbergasted

 

I could tell you were

always

taken aback

by my random insults

and instigations

 

Humorous yet, unfullfilling.

 

I was always a sad wrap

a seed in

the wind, blowing along

with the trash and inconsistencies.

 

Don't let me fall inlove with you,

it would be against my

own will.

 

And I always thought

you took that statement

for granted.

 

But who can ever tell?

Reviews

[Matthews Reggie]

powerful write full of realistic feelings... excellent poem...

[Member Now Left]

Full of genuine feeling. Just the way it should be! Well done. Great poem:-)

[.quan.011.]

This is a beautiful peom.

[Crinkle°]

I like it very much.

[Ruth]

Indecision at its best!
Wonderfully thrown into the fire, what do the flames predict? lol
Awesome work
xx

I didn't mean it. Yes, I did. No, I didn't. Wait, what?

[David W Moore III]

This one rides the edge of darkness, cutting slightly in to let us bleed, but severing nothing to put us down. We end up wounded and hurt, but living another day to read another of your pieces.

[Crow]

Very well done!

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Definitely another powerful peace and with longing

[Sasha]

Woah! the ending really hits you.
pretty good.