not to sentimental

Her fingers drift

fall.ing

over keys and notes

 

She doesn't mind

the shift

and stumbles across

the breaking

point

 

No one sees hers

in the dark

As she gasps in

simple breaths

 

Delicate

the flame that

flickers

Smoke filling

her ample

breast

Author's Note

*A quick thought before i head to work!*

Reviews

[sushi]

"No one sees hers
in the dark
As she gasps in
simple breaths"

Amazingly good read.

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I actually like this alot.

[Akshat♥]

short & sweet poem....great:)

[Charles]

Nice read

[Crinkle°]

that's beautiful.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Simply wonderous.

[Ruth]

Lush imagery!
Excellent use of wording here too!
Wonderful poem hon
xx

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

wow wow good yes and i have felt this but not been able to describe it like this so thank you for your wonderful style

the dark covers so much.

[Michael X]

Amazing to the point its hard not to sing the praises of your flow and talent. and the imagery and simplicity thats easy to understand yet
brings your words to life because writing poetry is meant for some,

this poem sings everyday life and drifts of thought taken with simple breaths, and sentimentalism is each word delicately surrendered.
A metaphorical snapshot of perfection.