Simply Put

Simply Put

A Poem by Moonflower

This isn't a smooth minded situation

I have no cure for hesitation

Lieing is my convocation

And if you see me, there's no relation

to where I am and what you see

Its all apart of perceiving

 

So don't let me feel humiliation

I'm not meant for devastation

There arent any words for correlation

So I'll end this sentence with impatience.

 

 

© 2010 Moonflower


Author's Note

Moonflower
Trying to rhyme. I'm not so good any more. lol

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This was fun and interesting. Its always nice when somebody can say something with such whimsical repose. I wonder if sometimes this clouds us from really saying something though? Being whimsical and fun is great, but sometimes conventions can distort directness and can make a message seem less important or irrelevant. Be careful and consider everything. Thanks

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I actually enjoyed this. The rhyme worked well. Great read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was fun and interesting. Its always nice when somebody can say something with such whimsical repose. I wonder if sometimes this clouds us from really saying something though? Being whimsical and fun is great, but sometimes conventions can distort directness and can make a message seem less important or irrelevant. Be careful and consider everything. Thanks

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Moonflower

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