I'm lost with you

There isn't anything as beautiful

Eyes closed,

steady breathing. 

 

I'm stunned, waiting in

the moonlight with

bated breath

While you stand in the

distance

 

Elegance

comes to mind

as you flow and tremble

Smooth as porcelain

into my arms

 

I fall back

pillowed in your

hands

You grasp at the

sheets

spilling over

 

And I'm tossed into

sedation

Each kiss like a sweet

addiction

Your hands against me

feels like

The only salvation

I'll ever find

 

Embrace

isn't the word for

this

This invocation

as our shadows flicker

and die

on the wall

 

I need you...because

I've never felt this before.

 

Your body has become my sanctuary.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ehh..

Reviews

[Bard Constantine]

Nicely written depiction of the breathless first feelings of passion, the turning point in a relationship where one finally free-falls into being with another, come what may...

[al25]

Amazingly worded. Everything in the poem flows so well and your descriptions are really good.

[Sports Girl]

Great poem. It was good and flowed well.

[Dream Weaver]

Ok this was pretty sensual.
felt it through your flow
that was spot on...

[Cynthia]

That's a great poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great write about merging from two beings into one. Not just in the physical sense. this was tastefully written and the emotions are clearly conveyed.

[Young Mountain]

Well written again

Again, you have a wonderul way with words.

Two lines come to mind in this piece
"as you flow and tremble Smooth as porcelain into my arms" - great use of metaphor here.

Your hands against me feels like The only salvation

such a wanting here.

Great stuff

[Norma M Sutton]

Well expressed.

[Liz]

This is wonderful. It's so dreamy, kind of. Flowing and it has wonderful imagery. The line "and I'm tossed into sedation" is really great. Nicely done!

[kuru]

I really liked your title..and you have such nice imagery in your words..."as our shadows flicker and die on the wall"...nice