I'm lost with you

There isn't anything as beautiful

Eyes closed,

steady breathing. 

 

I'm stunned, waiting in

the moonlight with

bated breath

While you stand in the

distance

 

Elegance

comes to mind

as you flow and tremble

Smooth as porcelain

into my arms

 

I fall back

pillowed in your

hands

You grasp at the

sheets

spilling over

 

And I'm tossed into

sedation

Each kiss like a sweet

addiction

Your hands against me

feels like

The only salvation

I'll ever find

 

Embrace

isn't the word for

this

This invocation

as our shadows flicker

and die

on the wall

 

I need you...because

I've never felt this before.

 

Your body has become my sanctuary.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ehh..

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Yeah, what's w/the "ehh.."? This is fine romantic sentiment, tender, beautiful, without being sappy.

Really, this becomes a spiritual alchemy -- "moonlight," "elegance," "flow," "salvation," "invocation," "shadows flicker and die," "sanctuary."

This is romance as inspirited soul ritual, and very beautiful indeed.

[Ruth]

Oh, I love the last line! lol
Sanctuary is a powerful word to infuse within this wonderful poem!
Excellent work!
xx

[Poetry Girl]

great poem!

[Aven]

I don't think you realize what a great poem you got here.

[JassalynHope]

its so cute :]

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes when the love is good. We will become lost and be very content. I like the emotion and feeling in the poem. Each line added to the strength of this poem. I like the last line. To be a sanctuary to someone is a great responsibility. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Akshat♥]

nicely written...closing your eyes & feel for someone ...it feels like you are in heaven....i like this poem...tc:)

[Randolf Ramos]

When we are with somebody we love, world revolves around us, sharing with the different world that knows love the same way we do. To be with her him lies happiness as long as love is shared in mutual way.

glad i read this after broken branches. i don't feel alone anymore. and what's with the "ehh.."? i like how at the end it was grappling for the word to adequately describe the feeling. sometimes there are no words. even for poets.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. I like this. THERE SHOULD BE NO EHH! lol you are a very good writer.