Between the Spaces of Time

　

As star dust spills
across this black canvas
Sparkling into a forbidden
slice of heaven

I sigh and let go of the easel
waiting to see your
Iridescent eyes
staring into the Sun's blazing
rays

...And I stand back....

Immersed in the beauty
of your Saturn lined aura
as you dance around the rings
of eternity

I watch
from my broken Milky Way
hoping for gravity
to hold me

Here
in this moment

But i let go...

Fall into the waves
of cosmic balance,
wading on the shores of
Neptune's cerulean sands.

We sweep across the lulling
folds of time
Painting stars on the vast
canvas of our hearts

Breaking out of that circular motion
of life
in this never ending galaxy...

I see the wastelands of mars in
your eyes
And you find redemption in
my moon struck sighs...

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Romantically stardusty. "Iridescent." And after "Neptune's" did you mean "cerulean," the shade of blue? Cap "Mars."

Emotions expressed via planetary bodies intrigues.

"As stardust spills
across this black canvas
sparkling into a forbidden
slice of heaven"

The opening lines echo magically long after reading.

"I see the wastelands of Mars in
your eyes
and you find redemption in
my moonstruck sighs..."

A lunar female offering to the embattled Martian male.

Stellar starlit lyricism.

[Akshat♥]

this is true..
i can easily relate to this..
description is very well expressed..
thanks for sharing:)

[Ruth]

So much from observation and the process of art recognising the beauty in life in the heart, the ebb and flow here is wonderfully done love!
xx

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I really like this. I really like how the galaxy is involved in your love! Great job...

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

very beatiful. Very very good.

[Sports Girl]

Wow very beautiful and a fantastic job

[Jonathan De Elvira]

you are artist , no denying that as you paint your self within this wonderful journey ."
Robin said it all....

Damn, I can't find a proper words on my own...XD

[nono]

TRUE! I love it such a beautiful poem I love thinking about things in space! I love this poem probably one of my favorite by you nicely done. I can't wait to read some more of your writings!

[Robin]

you are artist , no denying that as you paint your self within this wonderful journey .

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is really far out. I love it.
It reminds me of *The stars that play wit laughing Sam's dice*
Thank you for this magical journey.