Ode To Her

Ode To Her

A Poem by Moonflower

 

 

Lay me down

in rolling pastures

Taste this concious,

sweet disaster

 

I see you standing by

the water

Calling to me,

Come my daughter

 

Isis, Lady of the Nile

Queen of Heaven,

I am your child

Feel my heart beat

for your name

Do I seek you out in vain

 

Ishtar, Mother of my heart

Don't leave me here to fall apart

I do beseech your holy name

I find this world is still the same

 

Lay me down across the water

I will come home to be your daughter

 

 

 

© 2010 Moonflower


Author's Note

Moonflower
My patron~Isis~Ishtar~Inanna~

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It's always nice to hear from a fellow pagan ;) Nice read D.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was a mystical poem and nicely written.
The like the way it ended the most. Keep up the great work.

Kelley


Posted 14 Years Ago


Hello Moonflower,

Stunning and beautiful. You do have a way with words which make the most beautiful blush. Well done.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You grant Ishtar the power to enter your gates, without having to break them down. The beauty of this simple poem shines for all.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful prayerful offering to the goddess within and without~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful ode, to beautiful dieties

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this peom. Words and the peom were prefect.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow ! damn, i love it especially the 4th stanza...
I adore the pure words, the pure deep meaning, the image.
Outstanding way of writing :)
one of your best.. I like it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an enchanting incantion ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Moonflower
Moonflower

Louisville, KY



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