Ode To Her

 

 

Lay me down

in rolling pastures

Taste this concious,

sweet disaster

 

I see you standing by

the water

Calling to me,

Come my daughter

 

Isis, Lady of the Nile

Queen of Heaven,

I am your child

Feel my heart beat

for your name

Do I seek you out in vain

 

Ishtar, Mother of my heart

Don't leave me here to fall apart

I do beseech your holy name

I find this world is still the same

 

Lay me down across the water

I will come home to be your daughter

 

 

 

Author's Note

My patron~Isis~Ishtar~Inanna~

Reviews

[sushi]

"I see you standing by
the water
Calling to me,
Come my daughter"

The nature has been handled well and the poem is ending beautifully...

Thanks for sharing.

[KL]

An eloquent visual caressing the readers eyes. Nice.

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beautifully written with such a emotional feel..

[Aven]

"Lay me down
in rolling pastures
Taste this concious,
sweet disaster"

a second on my tongue, forever in my mind.

[CLosed]

Great Poem i love the rhyme of structure.

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece- peaceful and gently penned... excellent write.

-Coral-

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the magical qualities in the words. I enjoyed dwelling in the safety
of the feminine strength. The power that gives life to all can actually be
very frightening.

[M.Kilani]

I can see you're getting deep in touch with the book of law, the usage of such goddesses was amazing, I have many friends who would be interested in such a piece, 93 my friend ;)

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting poem.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Lay me down across the water

I will come home to be your daughter"

very powerfully worded...