New

Crisp air, tingled.

Bent me forward, toward

eyes that sang

with blood rimmed in a raucous flood

of undisguised emotion,

flicker and stare, don't hold me

there where the wind has

blown before. I just don't know you,

can't control what's true,

with all these feelings in the dark

Reviews

[alan khan]

very little of what most writers do actually makes me stay and read from start to finish. i read this start to finish about three times. this is for me an insanely enjoyable read.
"with blood rimmed in a raucous flood of undisguised emotion"
amazing amazing work. i'm gonna grant you a three dollar raise, you've earned it.

[Moonflower]

Thank you so much for your admiration and faithful readership ;) I enjoy your comments and reviews. It has been a very very long time since I have logged into my account here, and its wonderful to read your words again. I'm not even sure if you still are active on this site, if so I hope to hear from you again. I hope to be active again here once again, I have had a very bad spell of writer's block that has lasted for far too long. I hope the urge to create eludes me no more and I can return with passion to the thing I love most.

[alan khan]

yeah still kickin around on here. check in a few times a day. i hope your writers block fades away soon! :)

[An owl on the moon]

Your words build such a beautiful fire of emotions... this setting coming alive in the perfect tensions of longing... of wishing.... and yet of realizing that it's hard to grasp the truth in the darkness... Powerfully voiced... Hope all is well in your world... you're missed here in this one...

[alan peter kelly]

Is it me? Or do i sense a touch of eroticism in the air? Crisp...concise...and for me.
.a dip in a sensuality one need not clearly see to feel...lovely lovely Desiree im back and i hope to see you forward front centre and inspirational in the very near...almost NOW like future x

[Rikkevi Rue]

ahhh...like a drink of fresh cool water your writing is. Simple, clearly worded and with an aesthetic sensibility that is endearing. The last line takes all the others and pulls them into a tight corset of thought that captures the reader about the mental waste.

You write very well!!

[Moonflower]

Thanks so much for reading, this is the first thing I've posted in sooo long. It's nice to hear from you again!

[Rikkevi Rue]

and it is my pleasure to read you and see you here. Your skill and the unique of you are missed!

[Moonflower]

you're much too sweet, dear! thank youuuuuu (((((:

[_mal]

This is quite beautiful, going to come back for another read

[Moonflower]

awww thanks dear