Part Me

You don't see me

Electric lights blink

eyeballs in a cave

and your head turns

round and round

A swivel on the staircase

you're bringing me down

like the sky, you're alone

All open heart.ed

while I stay contained

They said Time was a rule

A clock watchtower in the

background

Disregarding all those

beats of the heart

There's blood 

in your veins

It's not red, it's blue

But the oxygen 

is turning us a different hue

It's a long way out

through stars and trees

Rustle like the wind is there

but you don't care and 

No one ever said you would..

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Author's Note

Whimper in the Darkness

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

Hey Moonflower. Been a long time!
Nice to partake of your ink again...

"It's a long way out
through stars and trees
Rustle like the wind is there
but you don't care..."

You still have that moonlight touch I see! RR

[M. Stein]

Wow, so intense, really good!

[Moonflower]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.

[BL]

Quite intense but I like the mixture you have put in

[Moonflower]

Thank you for reading

[Steve]

This is haunting and a little depressing. But its well written.

[Moonflower]

Thank you very much for the review

[Ruth]

There is such darkness in this light...liberation and yet suffocation ♥

[Moonflower]

Thank you for a lovely review(:

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

far too involved for how tired I am...welcome back..I shall return and re-review this

[Moonflower]

hahaha I feel that, thank you for reading though!

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

you gave me a video editing Idea

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

thank you for that

[Moonflower]

Hah! You're welcome