Fin

subliminal

Beneath
a
Star

Under
The blanket
of Night

The Snake

Consumes

The Owl

Reviews

[Clockwork]

It is a cryptic piece indeed. One can really take this in many directions. It can be applied to many situations. At the moment I am inclined to take it at a more literal level and take in the images. I think the images have a haiku sort of purity to them where they can be observed for what they are, then processed for what they mean overall.

[Moonflower]

Right on point. Thanks for reading.

[tynamite]

I love this one. Fin. And gone in an instant. That's how life is. How dark!

[Alessander]

this feels like a myth or some jungian dream...

[Moonflower]

Thank you for the lovely comment

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad vision create by the poem. I wonder can a snake consume a owl? Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Moonflower]

Thank you for reading...and pondering, my words. You always leave such thoughtful comments, thanks. again.

[Skye]

Many things happen under the cover of darkness that very few people, besides the ones involved, know about. Most people say they love nature, that it is all pretty flowers and cuddly animals, but it isn't. Wonderful poem in very few words. :)

[Moonflower]

Much thanks, I appreciate the review dear.

[Moonflower]

Yummy... for the serpent...
A good metaphor for those on full moon...

[Moonflower]

Thanks. :)

Oh so very welcome :)