Listen To What Surrounds You.

This a little something that I learned while in my darkest hours.

 When your in your darkest days, things seem hopeless. Trust me I know. However if you let your darkest days become your life, your only killing yourself. Life may seem unbearable but it doesn't mean you give up. Sometimes you have to listen to what surrounds you because there maybe something helpful. I can't explain really. Just keep your head up, even in the darkest hours come a little bit of light. Trust Me.

Reviews

[De-personalize Yourself]

"Sometimes you have to listen to what surrounds you because there maybe something helpful."
I understand exactly what you mean. There's a certain wisdom in nearly everything... the way the wind filters through the trees, the whimsical nature of a squirrel storing food for winter, the warmth in a kind stranger's eyes... that too many people simply overlook. I really enjoyed reading this. You carry beautiful knowledge that many people your age lack. Spread this knowledge with anyone and everyone you meet. Don't be ashamed or embarrassed to spread your love unto everybody. If you don't mind me asking, what experience inspired you to write this?
As beautiful as this piece was, I have to point out that there are a few grammatical errors. There are a few places where commas should have been placed ("trust me, I know. However, if..." "...to what surrounds you, because...") and an improper form of "your" ("If you let your darkest days become your life, you'RE only killing yourself"). Also, if you switched the words "really" and "explain" in the third to the last sentence, it would greatly improve the flow of the prose.
Keep on writing, Desi. xox

[Desi's Journey]

Thank you very very much on the critiques and the compliments. My inspiration for this came from when I was a freshman in high school, and people were trying to help me through some really rough times but since I was soo stubborn I completely under estimated their advice. That got me into some really huge problems which I am still facing now in my sophomore year of high school. These problems are being told in my book. "My Lovely Bones".

[De-personalize Yourself]

You are very very welcome! Just remember that this, too, shall pass. Be careful using a title so close to that of a published novel, though! It could get you into some copyright issues later on down the road, as I'm sure you intend to publish your book. xox

[Desi's Journey]

Thanks I surely will, I just had some issues coming up with a name that reflects my story.

[De-personalize Yourself]

I understand that completely. Naming prose is one of the hardest parts of being an author. That and the alcoholis..... I mean the grammar, of course. Hahahah (:

[Mo7ammed]

That was an inspiring share of feeling , thanks