Falling At Your Feet

So many things I know are not as they seem.
Yet never can I stall my tears flowing stream.
Your words sink in like a fatal blow.
Ah but that enticing look sinks lower my wicked beau.
To ever hang upon your every commanded word,
Oft is difficult you see, as my desires are much preferred.
With the angels tonight my sweet do sleep...
Ah but back to your devil's company in shadows dost you creep.
For readily would I burn forever in hell's fires, for
but a night in your arms.
Ay me! Lost am I, when I be the recipient of your charms...
Oh forever wanting of your love, forever to be falling at your feet.

Alyssa Gandolfi

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

An interesting style of write.
I feel however, that it sort of damaged your delivery.
The rhymes seemed a little forced.
The message however is a deep one.
A heartfelt write.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow what a visual you painted here. When I can watch the poem unfold before my very own eyes I consider that poetry at its finest. I haven't written that yet but I just read it here. Great job. I will be back for some more.

[Done]

You have a fantastic ability to really stimulate the mind with your poetry. It's not something I can read and say to myself "That's nice..." but I really have to read your works and think about it--dive into it and search for its meaning. Your poetry seems to always tell a very colofrul story--and it's always so well done.

Thank you for a fantastic read.
Josh