My Soul Dost Fly

 

Alyssa Gandolfi

 Ay me, my soul dost fly.

Shall I tell you why?

Why my soul’s song repels,

And my heart generously swells.

Ah but the air is sweet tonight.

And my but the stars shine so bright!

Ay me, but I feel as though I could fly,

As my eyes reflect my enamored sigh.

Ah love! Love be the reason my hearts on fire.

And strong be my love, as is his wicked ire.

As if from heaven, fell he into my life.

And he so lovingly protects me from any strife.

He is my love, my affections, my friend.

And what it all comes down to in the end,

He’s the reason I wish to yell to the world in a boastful cry,

He is the reason my soul dost fly.

Reviews

[Legion]

"Spread out your wings you are an angel and remember to deliver with the speed of light." - Queen

An excellent piece illustrating your gift bestowed upon you. Well done. This caught my eye 'cause I like the word "dost". lol :)

[THE LOST ROSE]

I love this piece. There is something very creative but very spiritual with your poem. I love the rythmn and how you took the reader to each stage of your flight. I ended up on the edge of my seat. Thanks for the journey. I will come fly with your other writes again. I enjoyed.

[The Elder Pine]

I really like the old English and the poetic devices you use; this is one of my new favorites.

[Baby Boy]

Wow! This is beautiful gurl and a very refreshing and calming read! I loved it! My ears doth loves it! LOL! Great job sweetie! It sounds like magic to me! :) One luv gurl!


-JC-

[forfila]

Truely I can nothing but admire your artistry.
Such a lovely, passionate cry, to read it is like a relief, I must add this to my favs list I think =)

Love,
Me