Voice of the Raven

A moment in my day today

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Image copywrite DesertDreamer

 

 

Overhead flying

Call of the winter ravens

Ancient voices speak

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Adam Whitworth]

nice one

[sharonlee]

Love this and miss you. xox

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

True art in every sense and in this i get a great sense of peace my friend perfect in every sense keep posting cheers gonzo

[Poetic Beauty]

Ravens are.depicted in many ways. I love the photography that goes along with these words

[Desert Dreamer]

maidahl, this is a haiku, it is a simple formatted view of nature that can also be interpretted with a symbolic meaning. I'm not going to give any more details, the best haiku need to be pondered in order to find their meaning, the questions you ask are best answered by you.

I'm not saying this is a "best" haiku, only that my poem is not "acting like a poem", it is one. Please look up the definition of haiku if you need to know more. Thanks.

[Laura Maidah]

What are the ancient voices? Are they disembodied? I feel like this is acting like a poem without actually being one.

[Another Relic]

Commendable work. Well done.

[Whiskurz]

Beautiful Haiku.....Whisk