Heart of the Earth
A Poem by
Desert Dreamer
experience out in the desert
Heart of the tortoise
caged breath
the earth still breathes
© 2011 Desert Dreamer
Author's Note
My photo taken at Wupatki Pueblo ruins.
Reviews
Your wondrous photo and simple yet descript words not only paint a picture in my soul, but a yearning to go on a dream quest to the desert.
Beautiful!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Thank you for the amazing photo. I like the artwork and the gifts for us from a time from the past.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you for the amazing photo. I like the artwork and the gifts for us from a time from the past.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That was great. haiku is not an easy thing to write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
That was great. haiku is not an easy thing to write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
ah brilliant - love hte picture - the tortoise head - the earth breathes indeed! nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
ah brilliant - love hte picture - the tortoise head - the earth breathes indeed! nice!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
great photo and fantastic Haiku...
Posted 13 Years Ago
great photo and fantastic Haiku...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Whatever in the World is that....!!
and yes a lovely Haiku.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Whatever in the World is that....!!
and yes a lovely Haiku.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Yes! The Earth still breathes. Wonderful Haiku.
I took a similar photo when i was there a couple years ago. My poem 'The Sentinel' has one of my photos from that trip.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Yes! The Earth still breathes. Wonderful Haiku.
I took a similar photo when i was there a couple years ago. My poem 'The Sentinel' has one of my photos from that trip.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I can imagine the energy felt there ...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I can imagine the energy felt there ...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You can have roots and still have wings... lovely little piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
You can have roots and still have wings... lovely little piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
ah, thank you
Posted 13 Years Ago
ah, thank you
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 19, 2011
Last Updated on July 20, 2011
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Desert Dreamer Sonoran Desert, AZ
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